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few days ago I overheard two women talking about what they liked and disliked
about a particular book. While they were fans of different aspects of the
story, they both agreed on disliking one
trait: lengthy setting descriptions. As a writer, I’m aware this is a no-no,
but it was nice to hear actual readers state it. Long, drawn-out setting
descriptions was one thing these two women were not willing to spend their
summer on.
The
other day I spoke to another friend. She’d been adamant about finishing a particularly
good page-turner. I asked her how it turned out.
“It
was pretty good. I just get impatient when the author goes on and on after the
story is over.”
Okay,
another point well-made.
As
writers, we need to be sensitive to those things that irk our readers.
Unfortunately, it doesn’t take much to turn a reader off from our stories.
Do
you have any pet peeves when it comes to a good read? What would ruin an
otherwise good book for you?
Heidi Chiavaroli is a writer, runner, wife, mother, and grace-clinger—not necessarily in that order. Ever since taking her first trip to Plimoth Plantation with her sister, mother, and grandmother at the age of nine, she has been fascinated with history and its significance to today’s people and culture. Heidi is the winner of ACFW’s 2014 Genesis Contest, Historical Category. She lives in Massachusetts with her husband, two sons, and Howie, her standard poodle. Learn more about Heidi on her website: www.heidichiavaroli.com.
Heidi Chiavaroli is a writer, runner, wife, mother, and grace-clinger—not necessarily in that order. Ever since taking her first trip to Plimoth Plantation with her sister, mother, and grandmother at the age of nine, she has been fascinated with history and its significance to today’s people and culture. Heidi is the winner of ACFW’s 2014 Genesis Contest, Historical Category. She lives in Massachusetts with her husband, two sons, and Howie, her standard poodle. Learn more about Heidi on her website: www.heidichiavaroli.com.

I dislike characters whose actions are inappropriate for their age. Characters who are in their late thirties and early forties but dress, act and have hobbies that people in their early twenties enjoy. It just makes me want to put the book away.
ReplyDeleteInteresting! I hadn't really thought of that, but I can see where that would be a hang-up. Noting to myself... ;)
DeleteHeidi great post! A couple if things that bug me are too much information about the setting and too many research tidbits. If a book is set in the depression I don't need to know how much every item costs. A price thrown in sparingly makes more of an impact.
ReplyDeleteAnother great point, Terri! Too many details can definitely be distracting.
Deleteconversely from your friends "extended ending" experience, i recently read one that did the opposite. while the ending was anticipated, it was basically summed up in a few paragraphs when it could have taken a full chapter. le sigh, such a fine balance for us as writers!
ReplyDeleteSo true, Robin! That can also be frustrating. There is definitely a happy medium somewhere there. Now to perfect it as writers...
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